Monday, July 9, 2007

Hot Flashes on the Fourth of July

Tonight was another show at the barn. Someone should have told me. It went smoothly, no blue lights coming to bring complaints. The picture is of the back of the barn. I like to hang bikes from the trees.

And a poem from the past.


Hot Flashes on the

Fourth of July

Whirly gigs of sparks and colors swirl

on the surface of the zodiac in Gasworks

Park, staining the dark bronze; remnants

of children’s delights. The hillside


overlooking the bay is surveyed and stalked

to the inch, a patchwork of flesh, picnic

blankets, spent beer cans and burnt paper

from an arsenal of popping toys. The crowds


strain upward, crane, count the minutes,

elbow into position, re-evaluate the area.

It starts. Fire in the sky. The dark

screen of night brightly colored


with searing light, shades of victorious

war. Liberty passes through the crowds

in the figure of a fire-haired woman. She

leaves on a motorbike, unnoticed.




SP

First published in Maxtix 1980

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Liberty passes through the crowds in the figure of a fire-haired woman. She leaves on a motorbike, unnoticed.

I dunno, maybe it's me. I cannot imagine, for the life of me, anyone with hair the color of fire coming or going anywhere without being seen. It just doesn't make sense, add up. That kind of woman has that it thang, ya know, even without the bike.

Though bikes are tres, tres.

Thank you for gracing us once more with your words. Jesus, it's easier to get a good cup of java than to find something here these days.

(Hey, how was that? Did it work for you? Did it? Naw, didn't think so. Guilt's just sooooooo not my style.)

Hope you're floating with the swimmie things. They can be a real source of comfort and peace, piece.

(smiling and sighing at life)

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OrdinaryShark said...

Hello PT- Nope, that's just the way it happened. I was there.

Sighing and smiling at life.

monkeytree said...

Gasworks Park huh? That was a lifetime ago.

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